quote: " I wake to the drone of an airplane engine and the feeling of something warm dripping down my chin. I lift my hand to feel my face. My front four teeth are gone, I have a hole in my cheek, my nose is broken and my eyes are swollen nearly shut. I open them and I look around and
I'm in the back of a plane and there's no one near me. I look at my clothes and my clothes are covered with a colorful mixture of spit, snot, urine, vomit, and blood."
question: I just started the book today, and I only had a meager 15 minutes to read, so I am really just wondering what will happen next?
comment: In my short 15 years I have done a ton of writing and something I have always been taught is to start with a hook or attention grabber to maintain the interest of the reader. I think the quote above is great hook, it's gory and explicit and it holds an interest that forces you to continue to read further.
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2 comments:
haha Karina.
Your quote was oh so very positive.
I liked your comment though because you were able to reference to your real life in reference to the book. Lol, i didn't know you wanted to be a writer though :)
i loooove this book(:
you like it ?
aand i wont tell you
what happens next,
kcos it might not
be as exciting(:
lolzzz (:
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